Adultery The Untold Story of Abhiram's Erotic Journey - Part 1
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(13-06-2025, 12:29 AM)Jajinakajanare Wrote: Great updates..
I believe u have introduced too many characters too early
Every female character seems same.. teasing him

Thank you. Yes you are correct. I am correcting that mistake, just focusing only on 2 or 3 characters.  Originally I wanted to introduce the real life scenario. Where men flirt with different girls at different locations. I just wanted to establish that. But it misfired. 

Thank you for pointing the mistake. 

-- Shailu
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RE: The Journey of Mr.Abhiram - Part 1 - by shailu4ever - 13-06-2025, 02:25 AM



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