Misc. Erotica Maheen ........ Mohy Rang Dy Piya (Completed)

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Bhai I am a fan of your writing but again here i feel Vinod is not a Hero but a victim, lost his wife and married to someone who is been fucked by many and might as well continue to fuck many until there is an interfaith angle but again Vinod lost is pious wife and found an adulterous wife where as Asif seems to be real Hero usbe Maheen jaise ko chod diya and moved on with someone else. Story ofcourse had a great start.