Adultery விழியில் விழுந்து இதயம் நுழைந்து
Game40it,
                   Wow! Your writing simply superb.
The way you narrate a story paa,
really who are you?    You stories only focus on
Human emotions , the way you transforms their  emotions
 To  broke social infrastructure  ...
The  char all are good but they are  not doing good but not their fault ....
Mathan : not satisfying, 
Shoba   :  guilt feeling,
Senthi   :  belive her so much
  The story tells who will win ( love or lust )
Well constructed the pain of love(husband)and lust(mathan).........finally won u r narration ,,,
Thank you so much for updates ....
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RE: விழியில் விழுந்து இதயம் நுழைந்து - by Tamilmathi - 11-06-2025, 02:02 AM



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