10-06-2025, 05:43 PM
(10-06-2025, 03:46 PM)Sriya2 Wrote: Maine koshish toh kari thi Vikram ki story ko jaldi fast forward karne ki… tab bhi log khush nahi they…. Anyway…. Main aage ka suspense nahi spoil karungi… but wait and watch.
Ab main story jaldi se aage nikaal du toh mujhe aap kuch na kehna… waise aage bhi badani hai mujhe story, yahan toh stuck nahi rahungi na.
Sriya story acchi jaa rahi hai... Ab fast forward aur slow ya rewind mat karna.... Jaise aap likh rahi ho waise hi likhna.... Bas Vikram ka dark side nikal dena koi scene banake....
Aapki writing skills par koi shaq nahi hai..... Mujhe pata hai aap is story se hum sab readers ko khush kar dogi.....
Val
