Adultery Rich, hot, haughty married women trapped by old dirty cunning care taker (completed)

[needhotku]

guys, i received some constructive criticism about the clumsiness of the conversation between Narsing and Lakshmi.  I edited that part to make it clear who is talking what.. hope now its better..  i had to use hindi to get the right emotions out of Narsing, Lakshmi

Disappointed with this decision not every body knows hindi bro atleast put English conversation in bracket. Started very well and now only hindi readers will understand the story and others are going to miss the plot.

Most the writer start story in English section and after sometimes they change it to hindi it's better u can start in hindi forum if you want to write in hindi.