31-05-2025, 09:48 PM
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(31-05-2025, 08:09 PM)aravindkkumar08 Wrote: Hey bro why you complete the story in a hurry. Climax is pathetic. You can elaborate with some more characters and scenes. You have the option in this story. Can you make alternative ending with threesome
I totally agree with you...I was not expecting such an amateurishly written climax either from such a renowned and famous writer...