21-05-2025, 07:41 PM
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(20-05-2025, 04:11 PM)Astroboy11 Wrote: Hey, that's really good writing. Can you give a timeline of events? When did they move from Mumbai? how many months were spent at the new place? when did the out of town work trips begin?
Was there just the one video or are there more?
Thanks
To be honest, I'm not writing a nolan level story . .. you will find plot holes bigger to drive a truck...
My idea is to start with one or maybe two characters and then add more if it plot demands and readers have interest still...
Based on that , I'll either pull along the story or end it with a climax I've already decided..
But im open for suggestions if needed ..
Next update is going to be tough as it is start of the action after i set the premise until now


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