Meera - The new Teacher

[redarc]

The story plot is very good the characters are very good the way you take the story is very good slow and templting. But it lags one inportant aspect even after more than 35 updates it does not make anyone cum. You can include few hot incidents in the story that waterfall plot was perfect plot but nothing happend there some dress drop or dress changing some humilation might have been added there or small touches some small templng incidents is needed in the story. The last post was good like conversation between the students commmenting about teacher. Take story to next level bro more than 35 posts but in same level makes little bour.

Exactly, but i also want to add more, like the dedication arjun showing in staring her teacher, a normal person would have felt that, and you are showing meera doesn't feel those stares... can't possible ... you can try in real.... you get to know... so meera should have felt and get interested in arjun by now thats body natural reaction