19-05-2025, 09:04 PM
(19-05-2025, 01:02 AM)shamson9571 Wrote: Give me the feedback (either here in the comments or in DMs) so that I know how you are liking the progression of the story
The story plot is very good the characters are very good the way you take the story is very good slow and templting. But it lags one inportant aspect even after more than 35 updates it does not make anyone cum. You can include few hot incidents in the story that waterfall plot was perfect plot but nothing happend there some dress drop or dress changing some humilation might have been added there or small touches some small templng incidents is needed in the story. The last post was good like conversation between the students commmenting about teacher. Take story to next level bro more than 35 posts but in same level makes little bour.


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