Adultery Love Sex And War Part 1 : Age Of Darkness

[Harry Jordan]

to be honest , Vikram was never a bull because Sona and hemant are not into cuckold lifestyle . An affair cannot be called as Hotwife/Cuckold lifestyle . So its fine . Also i said it before Vikram only respect hemant because he see him as ordinary guy , he does not feel threatened from him , He thinks hemant is just an average married guy . 


and also for meghna , i said that it before there is lack of positive female character . Hemant has multiple character that supports him but sonarika has none she is alone in her battle , there should be at least one female character who stands or help sona too . Its unfair to her as compare to hemant , i agree that her conversation to that lady was really helpful she needs a character who can guide her and help her someone who knows both hemant and sona . 

I am very happy with this update , Harry you have done tremendous job with this update , though i wanted more drama and tension between husband and wife before their anniversary sex night and hemant body reveal but i take whatever you gave lol . 

I really love encounter between husband and wife . 

We have sex now I WANT BLOOD . I dont know if you have already wrote the next update or not . Just request please it contains violence make it more brutal . I want the first strike from hemant should define and paint a picture how monstrous he is . hahaha just a small request . 
Again wonderful update , You Rock Harry .

I am happy that you liked it. The point of the story was how Sonarika connected with two men in her life as a predicament of Choice Vs Desire. Sonarika fell for Vikram because she believed Hemant lacked something because of his daily grind as a person. But the reality is Hemant was always the ideal person for her , she just never saw it. Now seeing the motivation and change in Hemant , Sonarika thickened her bond with him. That is why the sex happened because her fear of loosing him and the guilt of what she did all this time overwhelmed her. That is why the sex was intimate and passionate and full of love between them , more than Vikram , she craved her old Hemant back and this Hemant returned but more improved than his past self in her eyes. That being said , Sonarika cannot simply ignore Vikram anymore , she has already crossed the line when it comes to him. And it won't be easy for Vikram and Sonarika to end their fling that easily. Very soon we will see some of Vikram's backstory and where he comes from , and we will see a different form of bonding between Vikram and Sonarika , but as individuals. This will create a new turmoil in Sonarika , her real test is only about to begin.

I understand which is why Ragini showed up in the story at that point to show Sonarika a resolve. Now it will be a tug of war between Ragini and Meghna in carving the future path of Sonarika. The difference is Meghna is driven by her own revenge , so she is well motivated , while Ragini herself has gone through a nightmare in her marriage and divorce and she simply wants to save Sonarika from that wretched path. Plus there is also the resolve in Sonarika to be better , Hemant's motivation will now drive her to be the better version of herself. But Meghna is not going to stop , she is hellbent on giving Sonarika a "Better Life" and take her life long revenge , so she is focused on tearing this family apart.

I am sorry I might disappoint you in regards to Violence. But I can tell you the update ends in a major cliffhangar. The action part will be the starting of next chapter because next chapter will have heavy amount of action because it will finally reveal Hemant's backstory and who Michael King is and what is his legend. All I can say is Meghna thinks that Hemant is a simple average man who will be shattered when he learns about his wife's affair. But what if something else happens? What if Hemant does shatter and something else comes out , something far more terrifying? Father Albert did say that dark forces did try to end him , made him suffer in his past , but still Michael rose up like a pheonix , and ended them. This time , its not just his past self , what if this time , something new and more lethal is formed? Meghna thinks Hemant is just an average guy that can be easily trampled on and destroyed. But she has no idea that by trampling Hemant the good man , she is going to awaken the Archangel , something way out of her league.

Also Sonarika is not exactly a full on side character. But she will feel like a side character considering how much Hemant brings to the story. There will be more content that Hemant will bring in his arc which will sometime make Sonarika a side character in moments. But in my eyes , I intend to have both Hemant and Sonarika as the main POVs and lead characters of the story.