17-05-2025, 10:22 AM
Very nice story...... I did get chance after all to read all the 12 chapters.......
Nice narration..... You have improved your writing skills so much Preeti.... Try and add more emotions and sound effects instead of just one aaahhh or oohhhhss.... It will give more eroticism to read it......
Eagerly waiting for next update as mentioned by you every weekend there will be update and today weekend has started.....
Nice narration..... You have improved your writing skills so much Preeti.... Try and add more emotions and sound effects instead of just one aaahhh or oohhhhss.... It will give more eroticism to read it......
Eagerly waiting for next update as mentioned by you every weekend there will be update and today weekend has started.....
Val
