16-05-2025, 07:19 PM
Hey, just checked in this story but it's been dead for a while. The kick-off was pretty steamy, but then the plot got as twisted as a Jalebi. The characters were jumping around without making much sense and the story flow was more like a broken record. You thinking of hopping back in to straighten things out? Maybe give us some of that smooth storytelling and keep those plot points tight? Would be great to see some more! And about the AI help, no big deal, just remember to keep it on a short leash so it doesn't go off the rails. Would be great if you could update it and keep us readers hooked. Thanks!