Misc. Erotica College Ordeal - Breaking A College Topper

[Umavictor32]

Thanks for your input bro. Noted all your points.
AI is used to add some words which make the story more alluring. We are not yet into a zone where I will go full throttle on words ike nude etc. 

And for Ritika, the story has not revealed what happened in those three days. She is not our main character, and it's left to reader for now what happened with her. It can be a lot of psychological breakdown , attitude breaking or losing control. What you read is just the aftermath.

Just a suggestion... When you are declaring a character and when you show how strong that character is, you should clearly depict the act done by that character... For example... In the first scene if you have shown how badly ritika was used by rashid, then readers can anticipate the same or more brutal for the female lead character.. You can catch hold of their  excitement..,