[shake chilli]

I would say u have still done quite a decent job with the sex scenes. U r only going to improve it in the future. Realistic story works for me, U only need to add small amount of fantasy based spice to it when you orchestrate sex scenes.
Also, fun to read the cameo of the Dadi at the mall.

Thank to stories write karne ke liye


Thank 


Wating jab supriya gav jayegi to prkash se kese bachegi.