09-05-2025, 02:58 AM
I would say u have still done quite a decent job with the sex scenes. U r only going to improve it in the future. Realistic story works for me, U only need to add small amount of fantasy based spice to it when you orchestrate sex scenes.
Also, fun to read the cameo of the Dadi at the mall.
Also, fun to read the cameo of the Dadi at the mall.