07-05-2025, 10:30 AM
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(06-05-2025, 08:19 PM)eslx1212 Wrote: I do. The flashbacks may be eliminated or greatly shortened if unavoidable. More of Ganga is preferable.
(06-05-2025, 11:58 PM)Navipal007 Wrote: Me too bro. The woman cop is not needed as do Ganga's friend. Bring on as many male characters as you know why.
(07-05-2025, 01:48 AM)khemucha Wrote: the story is loosing focus due to detailed flashbacks and sideshows ... the original story thread is still fascinating but it gets interrupted every now and then ... anyway its upto you to decide how to take it forward ... you asked so I responded ...
Guys this is a story.. Not porn where there is mindless sex without any context or background..
Moreover, Without ganga's back story or flashback how on earth will you understand why she is doing all the things in the story or will be doing in future?