04-05-2025, 12:41 PM
Appreciate the efforts sean and thanks for the update.
But this tangent kinda seems unnecessary.... seems "shoved in" to .... breakoff from the to and fro of the hariya/Ramu encounters
.... also i think, there was no need for leaping.... (3 weeks later) ....instead it shudve been 2days later or so..... coz it wudve been logical for anita to go back to hariya with or without ramu....in a few days.....while looking forward to all the extra fun she was having....so this sudden bus trip wudve been a good detour....
Because now its begs to question; based on this update, What happened for 3 weeks.....with her....
Anyways, looking forward to next update..... hope you dont mind this mini feedback.
But this tangent kinda seems unnecessary.... seems "shoved in" to .... breakoff from the to and fro of the hariya/Ramu encounters
.... also i think, there was no need for leaping.... (3 weeks later) ....instead it shudve been 2days later or so..... coz it wudve been logical for anita to go back to hariya with or without ramu....in a few days.....while looking forward to all the extra fun she was having....so this sudden bus trip wudve been a good detour....
Because now its begs to question; based on this update, What happened for 3 weeks.....with her....
Anyways, looking forward to next update..... hope you dont mind this mini feedback.
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