03-05-2025, 04:15 PM
(02-05-2025, 05:27 PM)qazmlp Wrote: Great going with the level of Depravity in your story.
But try n bring it together and clarify the key goals of each character as its all getting very muddled, atleast for me.
Thank you for reading and liking the story. I am trying to make it a suspense thriller along with erotica. Keep reading it and you will find the answer of your question very soon.