02-05-2025, 05:27 PM
Great going with the level of Depravity in your story.
But try n bring it together and clarify the key goals of each character as its all getting very muddled, atleast for me.
But try n bring it together and clarify the key goals of each character as its all getting very muddled, atleast for me.


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