Dear Yazhini
Thank you very much for your response and clarifying the meaning of incest.
It is very kind of you to reconsider the role of character Arjun in this story. This shows how much care you have for the concerns of your dear readers. Thank you for that!
I would personally prefer if Arjun could be some 'distant relative' or maybe like a 'college friend' of Karthik who wanted to help from him.
There are many reasons as why many like me are a bit uncomfortable about Pavitra's relation with Arjun -
Number 1, Arjun being the 'blood brother' of Karthik. In Indian families, siblings are also considered part of family and if a wife is fooling around with the family members of husband then that is considered as something very repulsive (for the lack of word for incest) and the story based on that specific scenario is not erotica at all and an 'Adultery story reader' would not enjoy it at all.
Secondly, Pavitra is portrayed as woman of virtue! She is shown as a woman with very high regard, she is absolutely committed to her family, love her kids to death and devoted to her husband, (even when he's a wimp in bed), gave her hubby two kinds as a dutiful wife would, a woman of class who can be goddess just in a simple Saree. A woman of high moral standards but also stuck emotionally, trying to re-explore her sexuality as she deserves it rightfully!
Such a woman with such high standards, must have an upper limit beyond which she'll not cross. So readers see her as a woman of virtue who will not cross any line that damages the sanctity of marriage. She's thought of woman who's smart enough that won't disturb her current arrangements in the marriage. She may consider adultery outside the marriage, but would not do anything inside the family! and especially would not do the immediate brother! That's the hard cap she won't cross! If she does that, then she's reduced to person with no value, no virtue, basically not good for her character development!
The author has utmost freedom to write the story completely as per her wishes! But sharing some of the things that bother the readers especially if it needs urgent attention, can also help the author to understand the readers perspective better. And of course she's at total freedom on how she wishes to use this information and continue the story. Either way I totally respect her decisions.
At the end of the day it's all about the experience of enjoying the story.
Awaiting the next beautiful update dear ! Your big fan !
Thank you very much for your response and clarifying the meaning of incest.
It is very kind of you to reconsider the role of character Arjun in this story. This shows how much care you have for the concerns of your dear readers. Thank you for that!
I would personally prefer if Arjun could be some 'distant relative' or maybe like a 'college friend' of Karthik who wanted to help from him.
There are many reasons as why many like me are a bit uncomfortable about Pavitra's relation with Arjun -
Number 1, Arjun being the 'blood brother' of Karthik. In Indian families, siblings are also considered part of family and if a wife is fooling around with the family members of husband then that is considered as something very repulsive (for the lack of word for incest) and the story based on that specific scenario is not erotica at all and an 'Adultery story reader' would not enjoy it at all.
Secondly, Pavitra is portrayed as woman of virtue! She is shown as a woman with very high regard, she is absolutely committed to her family, love her kids to death and devoted to her husband, (even when he's a wimp in bed), gave her hubby two kinds as a dutiful wife would, a woman of class who can be goddess just in a simple Saree. A woman of high moral standards but also stuck emotionally, trying to re-explore her sexuality as she deserves it rightfully!
Such a woman with such high standards, must have an upper limit beyond which she'll not cross. So readers see her as a woman of virtue who will not cross any line that damages the sanctity of marriage. She's thought of woman who's smart enough that won't disturb her current arrangements in the marriage. She may consider adultery outside the marriage, but would not do anything inside the family! and especially would not do the immediate brother! That's the hard cap she won't cross! If she does that, then she's reduced to person with no value, no virtue, basically not good for her character development!
The author has utmost freedom to write the story completely as per her wishes! But sharing some of the things that bother the readers especially if it needs urgent attention, can also help the author to understand the readers perspective better. And of course she's at total freedom on how she wishes to use this information and continue the story. Either way I totally respect her decisions.
At the end of the day it's all about the experience of enjoying the story.
Awaiting the next beautiful update dear ! Your big fan !
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