Adultery The Language of Her Heart

[xossissippi]

Dear Yazhini

First of all I greatly greatly enjoyed the 'Lift Saga' and the 'Water tank' episode. For me these were one of the most erotic work I've ever read on internet, especially the Lift. The creativity is simply wild on another level! Your imagination is simply WOW!

Not wanting to discourage you or anything but....

I am a bit disappointed with casual slipping of 'Incest Material' with the encounter between Pavitra and Arjun. I am reading this story clearly marked as 'Adultery' and believe there are many like me who expect story line related to 'Adultery' and not 'Incest'. I found it a bit surprising, even though things were eventually leading up to the events between the two, but still I was hoping that their interaction would only be limited to purely to infatuation or just weird sexual tension and nothing more. However I had not expected a full blown sexual encounter between the two. I understand you wanted to build that up to next level after the events with the watchman but I could not find that erotic at all but was rather shocked. Because I came here to read to 'Adultery' (as the story is aptly tagged so) and not 'Incest'.

I understand people have different kinks believe me I have some wild ones (which I've expressed at the start of the story, ;) ) but 'Incest' isn't one of them. Hence even Xossipy also clearly demarcates between the two as separate categories. People who read 'Adultery' don't enjoy 'Incest'.

Dear Yazhini if there are further plans on more sexual encounters with between Arjun and Pavitra or if the story is divulging more into 'Incest' story line could you kindly change the category of the story from 'Adultery' to 'Incest' so that it reaches the right audience. Or at least provide a 'Cautionary Alert' before the start of such encounters and towards the end, so those chunks of story can be avoided by readers all together.

Your writing is absolutely fire and I appreciate all the great efforts it took.
I look forward to those fiery updates!!