Adultery Love Sex And War Part 1 : Age Of Darkness

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Oh Harry !
This was my main concern , I think you are going overboard with Sonarika's Infidelity . The way you portrayed her relationship with Vikram , The Sex , The chemistry is so well done that it destroyed any hope for her saving her marriage , As reader the material i read the only conclusion I can draw that Her marriage is over there is no hope left , Her admission that she loves Vikram mora than Hemant and her words about hemant portrayed him as Nanny for her child is enough to let reader think that the story moving in direction where the 10 year old marriage is going to end with blast that will only destroy Hemant , Because Sonahira has nothing to loose , She has already what she always craved or wanted , A loving Man who is rich and can provide the comfort life , She can get her kid anytime she wants but Hemant ? He will loose everything , His work , His family , His love , His kid , and the most the life he built on the graveyard of his past . Its funny because he is running from his past only to be betrayed by the future for which he left his past life . I feel that Bali incident should not be there , There was some hope left before the Interview night , Where she sworn that no matter what happened she always choose her family first , But the London trip not only she betrayed her husband but her kid too , That too selfish . Now Their anniversary part  for which i was very excited , very very excited is irrelevant now . Because its not gonna serve any purpose , One thing I am sure based on reading material that there is no chance that this marriage is gonna survive . If only Their anniversary happened before the Bali incident which would never happened because the couple could have reconcile their marriage and start a fresh new , but the bali incident has completely destroyed any hope that was left .

Maybe that was always the plan , But Again There was some character degradation with Sonarika's Character , Hell even Megha is SAINT in front of her . You made me to give some respect to Megha . lol . 

This is not criticism , its just what i felt . I wanted to wrote this after the Chapter 6 ends, But this update made me to write only this part . 

I am actually blaming your Skills here , Your writing Skills . This is some Omega Level( X-men ref) shit . You have wrote the part of Sonarika and Vikram affairs so well that i mean , The detailing , The stuff , The things those two love birids did , So damn Erotic . 
I mean How hemant gonna top that , For me he could never top all of those . He already lose . There is no way Sonarika ever going back to him . The fault here is not Sonarika's Its your writing skill . After this if in the story There is little hope where the husband and wife gonna reconcile then it would take hell of juice i mean hell of a material that be would be enough to convince that they actually love each other . Its gonna be great Challenge , To be honest I dont know if its possible. 

Yeah , but they eventually going to break up then its fine the story continues , But if they are not gonna Then I would like to see What and how harry gonna convince us That The couple actually love each other , and Hemant can actually out perform Vikram in every department , I know its sound like kids competition but then again you said that its sex story I never view it as sex story , Its already On the Top Tier level , The other part of the story done so well that the sex part become the least interested lol ( I did not read that part because I was feeling bad for Imaginary Character Hemant , I LOVE HEMANT"S CHARACTER SO MUCH )

But again this is your story , and these comments are just for fun , This should not affect to you any way . These are just little wishes of children who wants everything   .

( only wrote this because of your last comment ,  I am not sure if i am gonna read the Bali Part   but excited for the cliffhanger , will write more after part 6 )

But Again i am just ran out of words in your praise will write more after part 6 , Again Thank you for this , This is already a Masterpiece and Also please tell us about yourself a little Your education, background . I am just curious to know the brain behind this masterpiece ( again strictly no personal info just wants to know how do you create this story so complex with so many characters that too with so elaborately. The length of your chapters and the flow , Not a single paragraph feel like forced or filler , No potholes , The different scenes mix together I mean the lining of events and so on so on so on lol . I should stop and save it for later . lol 

Can we get a deadline ? I am so busy with work and study , I want that thrill of waiting for the next episode of your favorite tv show .
(Note :- Ignore the Grammar, Its almost 4 0 clock 

Peace out .

I argreg with u man  bali shouldn't have happen  sona infidelity has gone overboard ..... Vikram want sona to divorce ...that his intentions anywy and sona know that  but still went bali as she is sex craving (whore) .. I think aniversary not gonna happen bcoz hemant has information about vikram roaming with someone .......  He has to know thooo ...  He as been cuckold by his wife ....