7 hours ago
HI Suraj,
I can see that you put in some real effort to give this update the effect it is supposed to have on the readers.
I know the time it can take to make this happen alongside the daily chores of our lives.
I will still say this only for one reason.... your updates are spaced so far apart in time that we readers need to go back and read the previous one to connect to the current one...
Try to work on that please
I can see that you put in some real effort to give this update the effect it is supposed to have on the readers.
I know the time it can take to make this happen alongside the daily chores of our lives.
I will still say this only for one reason.... your updates are spaced so far apart in time that we readers need to go back and read the previous one to connect to the current one...
Try to work on that please
