Adultery The Rural Posting: Shipra's ordeal.

[Suraj76626]

One thing I hope the writer makes a little change with,is the reduction of poetic description of the moods of sexual participants and increase in description of the actual sexual act.
We get it,that former needs to be written but latter is preferred more by readers and story gets interesting with latter.
Just a suggestion.

Dear friend I get your point. Will try to cut down the drama a bit more.