Misc. Erotica Maheen ........ Mohy Rang Dy Piya (Completed)

[effie]

"Pink Bhai, iss baar update ka intezaar toh lamba tha, lekin jab aaya toh laga jaise sabr ka meetha phal mil gaya ho. Halankeh personally mujhe lesbian scenes se utni excitement nahi milti  main thoda dominant aur rough flavor ki deewani hoon  lekin Maheen ki nayi journey dekh kar dil sach mein excited ho gaya hai! Aapki writing mein woh slow burn aur realistic touch hai jo baaqi writers mein missing hota hai like wob aya us ne chud liya yeh woh aya aur usne chud liya apke kahani aise nahi hai apke kahani reality se bilkul match karte hai Har scene mein gradual change, har character ka depth kamaal hai. Lekin Pink Bhai, ab zara spice aur heat aur barhao na thoda sa dominance, thoda rough sex ka touch,Major Sahab, jaisa ,ajab se pyas,Agla update ka intezaar rahega iss baar zyada wait mat karwana