[Rajeev Gupta]

Instead of dialogue in sentence why don't you try to put a scene in a para.look like drama instead of story. This is my observation.

I will definitely try to do it in the next update. I just wanted to mix descriptions with dialogue to craft a more balanced theme and look. I didn't want to overwhelm it with lots of descriptions because the story will lack depth.

However, stay tuned for the next hot and spicy update to see if my dad will find out if my mom was in the room with Manoj. ??