10 hours ago
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(Yesterday, 10:13 PM)val.coutinho Wrote: Excellent update Preeti
I love the way she has opened up after the honeymoon.... Women need to be treated politely and as humans not as slaves or housemaids..... They too should be given freedom and respect as they deserve......
Very cleverly portrayed this point in the story..... Eager to read the next chapter.... Hope there is some action
Thanks Val...I am glad that you understood the real meaning of this story... You already know that I do not write fiction/fantasies...and this story is based on a real incident...It is mentioned in the last chapter and you can read it when it gets published...
I have received a few comments that this was a "mindless" story like a few other stories on this forum.
From this point on the "action" reduces as the story soon comes to an end... I am sorry to disappoint you...
But as you know my stories have a start and an end...So it is what it is....
