17-04-2025, 12:05 AM
(16-04-2025, 09:38 PM)pinkbaby Wrote: Next day Sunday tha to dono der sy hi neend sy jaagy ........... pahly Maheen ki aankh khuli ............. woh washroom sy fresh hony ky baad chaay bnaa ky laai ........ aor Vinod ko jgaya ...........
Bhaisaab aapki story bahut acchi hai aur taareef ke kabil bhi hai...
Par jaise ki maine pehle bhi bola hai, yaa toh aap apni "hinglish" sudhar lein...ya aap apne story fans ko good bye bol den...
Aapki likhit kahani sabdh jodhke padhne mein raat beeth jaati hai ki aapka kya matlabh tha... Please akhri request hai ki rehem karen...
Baaki choice is yours...
I will not bother to repeat myself again, and here I when I say myself, I have a few more story fans behind me who fllow your story and strongly echo the same opinion...
Rest is your choice...


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