16-04-2025, 09:56 PM
(16-04-2025, 12:08 AM)sexypreeti Wrote: Buddy, please proof read your story a few times before publishing... There are glaring mistakes...most common being "Herself" vs "Myself"... Just a suggestion...
Switching between 1st and 3rd person is difficult..
Appreciate for pointing out this.. i will take care next time