Wow Wow Wow! Just Wow!!!
What an amazing amazing update!.
The entire update was an amazing ride! You are an amazing writer Yazhini! There is MAGIC in your writing.
Everything I am imagining for the character Pavitra is coming true through your writing and I am so happy and glad and nervous, got my pulse quickening. Every bit from the past updates were erotic.
I am glad that this is not some 1v1 love or obsession story which could tend to get bored pretty quick. I love how Pavitra is not discriminating the source of love and admiration and lust! Even if a beggar wants to show all his love and attention she is willing to listen to his heart! In that sense she's such a damn GODDESS!
I am especially in love with her interactions with the balding watchman! Something about their interactions feels too Taboo and so Primal. It's like I am reading something I shouldn't read, watching something I shouldn't watch and source of it all is Pavitra - The seductress! After reading their bit (all three interactions) my heart racing really fast. Their encounter is more unique, more personal and more erotic of them all!
I like how she's openly berating the old watchman and how he's all nervous and anxious (or at least he's acting as such) and how she's enjoying it all!
It's not that she just wants to insult and humiliate him while taking sick pleasure out of it. I like the part where, she also feels sorry and pity for the middle-aged man (or was that his drama?) and try to cheer him up by talking more erotica and make him look at her maybe just a little, not too much that will piss her off but she wants to be desirable!
Her allure making him to submit to the desires from where and which parts of her body he 'stared' and lusted from his own mouth! The way she's openly talking about her sensual body parts and painting a visual erotic scene for the lowly watchman!
It is too too too damn erotic!
Can't wait more of this duo! The watchman may not be as innocent as he acts to be. At least by now, he should have understood that even though mam likes to insult him, she's not completely heartless! She feels pity for him, when he's sad and sorry. She shows kindness, Maybe he can capitalize on this "soft spot for him" and if he played his acting part correctly, it may land him in a 'situation' with the goddess that many even the most richest and the most handsome man could only dream of!
Maybe he'll increase the frequency of his visits, find any stupid reason to be with the goddess! Maybe he'll entertain her with his sob story to gain her affection and kindness, maybe she'll feel pity and invite him for a small cup of coffee or even the 'buttermilk' she asked him to have. Maybe that will increase the possibilities of 'certain things' happening with beauty. In the coming days she may want to purposefully dress provocatively solely for the benefit of the fat old watchman!
Can't wait to read more dearest Yazhini!
Eagerly waiting <3
What an amazing amazing update!.
The entire update was an amazing ride! You are an amazing writer Yazhini! There is MAGIC in your writing.
Everything I am imagining for the character Pavitra is coming true through your writing and I am so happy and glad and nervous, got my pulse quickening. Every bit from the past updates were erotic.
I am glad that this is not some 1v1 love or obsession story which could tend to get bored pretty quick. I love how Pavitra is not discriminating the source of love and admiration and lust! Even if a beggar wants to show all his love and attention she is willing to listen to his heart! In that sense she's such a damn GODDESS!
I am especially in love with her interactions with the balding watchman! Something about their interactions feels too Taboo and so Primal. It's like I am reading something I shouldn't read, watching something I shouldn't watch and source of it all is Pavitra - The seductress! After reading their bit (all three interactions) my heart racing really fast. Their encounter is more unique, more personal and more erotic of them all!
I like how she's openly berating the old watchman and how he's all nervous and anxious (or at least he's acting as such) and how she's enjoying it all!
It's not that she just wants to insult and humiliate him while taking sick pleasure out of it. I like the part where, she also feels sorry and pity for the middle-aged man (or was that his drama?) and try to cheer him up by talking more erotica and make him look at her maybe just a little, not too much that will piss her off but she wants to be desirable!
Her allure making him to submit to the desires from where and which parts of her body he 'stared' and lusted from his own mouth! The way she's openly talking about her sensual body parts and painting a visual erotic scene for the lowly watchman!
It is too too too damn erotic!
Can't wait more of this duo! The watchman may not be as innocent as he acts to be. At least by now, he should have understood that even though mam likes to insult him, she's not completely heartless! She feels pity for him, when he's sad and sorry. She shows kindness, Maybe he can capitalize on this "soft spot for him" and if he played his acting part correctly, it may land him in a 'situation' with the goddess that many even the most richest and the most handsome man could only dream of!
Maybe he'll increase the frequency of his visits, find any stupid reason to be with the goddess! Maybe he'll entertain her with his sob story to gain her affection and kindness, maybe she'll feel pity and invite him for a small cup of coffee or even the 'buttermilk' she asked him to have. Maybe that will increase the possibilities of 'certain things' happening with beauty. In the coming days she may want to purposefully dress provocatively solely for the benefit of the fat old watchman!
Can't wait to read more dearest Yazhini!
Eagerly waiting <3
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