12-04-2025, 08:45 AM
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(12-04-2025, 12:06 AM)Mortalbeast Wrote: In a haste I opened the last clip.
Well I lost you here on this episode...
All along you created a feeling of something arousing and sensual and in this episode you just bulldozed it all... Sorry to say but I am really disappointed...
You should have carried the same theme with your writing showing that he had won her with her willingness and not by breaking/claiming her!!!
I know this is your story and you have every right to write it your way...but I just had to speak out my mind...
Sad Sad Sad
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