Adultery Nalini and The Unseen Virus

[tweeny_fory]

I am saying in general... Biggest issue of this slow seduction stories are that we wont get a feel of it... To get that firstly we have to register by saying wat level the central character will be transformed to... For example there shd be a scene where a person who is transforming this character shd say as to wat extend he is gonna transform her and wat will be her end point after transformation... If can even u can use pics to shw it... Then only person reading the story will have a feel and clue of it

Thanks for offering a different perspective and providing feedback on the story. I understand the concerns you're raising and why you're asking these questions. The central dilemma remains: in the narrative, Nanlini will be sexually violated by strangers Anbu and Teja. However, a recurring question plagues me when I consider concluding the story in this way.

Namely, how believable is it that an ordinary housewife would willingly allow two strangers to have sex with her? Would she perform oral sex on them if she's never done that before? Would she endure double penetration, having only ever experienced sexual intimacy with her husband?

Mistakes and unfortunate circumstances can certainly lead people down unexpected paths, but how far can those deviations realistically extend? This question continually resurfaces as I write that particular part of the story. The tension between realistic portrayal and fictional narrative keeps haunting me, which led me to consider adding a poll to gauge reader sentiment. 

Unfortunately, it seems I can't add one after the thread has already been created.

Ultimately, if you were to ask my personal preference, I'd be inclined to end the story in a way that aligns with what readers would find most compelling – perhaps even culminating in a scenario where Anbu and Teja fuck Nalini and Nanlini finds some form of enjoyment from the situation.

However, the question of believability remains a significant hurdle.