07-04-2025, 05:51 PM
(07-04-2025, 04:18 PM)val.coutinho Wrote: Simply great... Marvellous.... Outstanding.... Your writing skills are getting excellent.... Please as I I commented before implement on the sound effects of the ohhhh and aahhh.... I'm sure every other reader is going to like the story from here onwards.... It might be the right time to add those in the next update.... Just before posting go thru the update once again.
Thank you for this wonderful story..... Waiting for an update eagerly.....
Thank You :)
I am going to need a lot of help with the "sound effects" part...