07-04-2025, 09:53 AM
(This post was last modified: 23-04-2026, 07:22 PM by tharkibudda. Edited 5 times in total. Edited 5 times in total.)
So I had this discussion with another author in literotica and when she gave this idea, I immediately laughed off telling it so similar to another story. But now I realise that most of these loving wives stories fall under very few specific templates and people aren't interested in other genres as much as I can see with my “The Village is No Place for Girls” story.
So here is my story written in First Person POV
Please note: This story takes place before the Jio Revolution in order to avoid several plotholes. That doesnt mean it will be perfect
Note : All pics generated through AI and any resemblance to any person is mere coincidental of AI
4/23/2026 Update
Hello All
I was writing my story and I deliberately made the pacing slow because I felt most of the stories move from a sanskari wife to a gangbanged whore pretty soon mostly because they make her submit so soon.
So despite many suggestions, I kept the suspense between the wife and Lakhan drawn out where she doesnt submit to him completely despite him using her several times. Also I didnt want the husband to be completely a cuckold to enjoy fapping to his wife's bang.
Although i would say despite being non cliche, i literally followed every cliche of these cheating wife story but i felt happy because I went in my own pace. I also regularly collected the feedback and incorporated a few and ignored the rest. I also got into arguments with few users which I now regret.
During December, I took the much awaited break I needed with my wife and children and since I had to celebrate sankranti, i told I will be back post that.
But unfortunately,life had other plans. A close person fell ill and the first two months was spent running after hospitals while also working on the side and also maintaining my kids education and wife's job. But the incident left me physically and mentally exhausted. I can no longer continue to write these stories ,not because my name is Rahul or my wife beat me but the incident left a deep impression on me and I cannot concentrate anymore on these activities.
i now have what people call as Writers block and Im not sure if it might even be cured anytime soon. SO If anyone wants to continue the story, please go ahead. Im not even sure I will even come back and read them given my state of mind. It doesnt matter if SHivanikaur ji or anyone takes it, although I would be happy if they continue same pacing while examining the deep intrusive thoughts of Manav and how he sees the changes in Dhristi slowly than a quick turn.
Also, I tried to close a lot of silly gaps like birth control pills . I dont know if i was missing the forest for the trees because I spent weeks on establishing the possibility of no accidental pregnancy. Bit of backstory of Lakhan's past etc but I dont regret it because i wanted this to a product of years not a few boring nights work before life happened.
The ones who want to continue may start or they may reach me where i can provide my idea of how the story I envisioned. they are free to include my plotline or modify if needed. Although i might take days to respond .
For the sake of story, the show must go on ,even if the original author retires. although I cant call myself original because the main idea was lifted from "who watches the watchman" series by sweetdreamssss and gave the idea to me
Signing off
Definitely Not Rahul who got beaten by his wife
So here is my story written in First Person POV
Please note: This story takes place before the Jio Revolution in order to avoid several plotholes. That doesnt mean it will be perfect
Note : All pics generated through AI and any resemblance to any person is mere coincidental of AI
4/23/2026 Update
Hello All
I was writing my story and I deliberately made the pacing slow because I felt most of the stories move from a sanskari wife to a gangbanged whore pretty soon mostly because they make her submit so soon.
So despite many suggestions, I kept the suspense between the wife and Lakhan drawn out where she doesnt submit to him completely despite him using her several times. Also I didnt want the husband to be completely a cuckold to enjoy fapping to his wife's bang.
Although i would say despite being non cliche, i literally followed every cliche of these cheating wife story but i felt happy because I went in my own pace. I also regularly collected the feedback and incorporated a few and ignored the rest. I also got into arguments with few users which I now regret.
During December, I took the much awaited break I needed with my wife and children and since I had to celebrate sankranti, i told I will be back post that.
But unfortunately,life had other plans. A close person fell ill and the first two months was spent running after hospitals while also working on the side and also maintaining my kids education and wife's job. But the incident left me physically and mentally exhausted. I can no longer continue to write these stories ,not because my name is Rahul or my wife beat me but the incident left a deep impression on me and I cannot concentrate anymore on these activities.
i now have what people call as Writers block and Im not sure if it might even be cured anytime soon. SO If anyone wants to continue the story, please go ahead. Im not even sure I will even come back and read them given my state of mind. It doesnt matter if SHivanikaur ji or anyone takes it, although I would be happy if they continue same pacing while examining the deep intrusive thoughts of Manav and how he sees the changes in Dhristi slowly than a quick turn.
Also, I tried to close a lot of silly gaps like birth control pills . I dont know if i was missing the forest for the trees because I spent weeks on establishing the possibility of no accidental pregnancy. Bit of backstory of Lakhan's past etc but I dont regret it because i wanted this to a product of years not a few boring nights work before life happened.
The ones who want to continue may start or they may reach me where i can provide my idea of how the story I envisioned. they are free to include my plotline or modify if needed. Although i might take days to respond .
For the sake of story, the show must go on ,even if the original author retires. although I cant call myself original because the main idea was lifted from "who watches the watchman" series by sweetdreamssss and gave the idea to me
Signing off
Definitely Not Rahul who got beaten by his wife


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