02-04-2025, 02:29 PM
(02-04-2025, 08:26 AM)Navipal007 Wrote: Have you even read the work of Bdrew ?? If not then i recommend you to do the same. Its not about the characters, it's about the content. Story should revolve around specific characters and if any new characters is to be introduced it should be only to forward the story of the central characters. Its not always about the sex but about the buildup to it. Moreover like others I too feel that infrequent updates is the reason is the main culprit.
I actually like the number of characters in this story.
Each having his/her own arc.
This story has one of the best erotic sequences(without actually having any sex) between two women,Ganga and Sundari.
All because of a minor character(as of now) Sundari.
Only complaint is the delay in updates for which the writer must be having his own reasons.....other than that,story is doing fine.
Let him cook.