02-04-2025, 04:02 AM
The major drawback with this story is that, the story stops in middle of every intercourse sessions. This creates a serious continuity issue.
If the author got inspired by the ancient Arabian story - "One Thousand and One Nights", then the author should understand that this tactic is pathetic to the core. This narrative style only helps the readers like me to wait for couple or three of your updates to read it together.
If the author got inspired by the ancient Arabian story - "One Thousand and One Nights", then the author should understand that this tactic is pathetic to the core. This narrative style only helps the readers like me to wait for couple or three of your updates to read it together.