02-04-2025, 12:56 AM
(01-04-2025, 10:02 PM)Navipal007 Wrote: Because of the infrequent updates it gets difficult to remain in touch with the story. While the story was hot with a mixture of eroticism and suspense at the start, it has turned into a huge glob of mess with many characters and many storyline running at the same time. The story should not have got rid of chacha and what was his name guy with Ganga as the protagonist with Srinu always one step behind the action and adventure undertaken by Ganga and her partners.
Sorry KK I m not criticising but any story with too many characters and plotlines tend to suffer under it's own weight. Hope you make it more linear with more frequent updates.
Always a fan of your earlier work
How many characters are too many ?
1, 2 , 5 ?
If a story has Hero, Heroine and a villian.. story is over in 1 update.
Villan kidnaps heroine. Hero beats up villan. Hero rescues Heroine.
If you feel like its too many subplots? you are loosing on main story.. then go read previous updates to brush up your memory.
Even after that you guys feel like story has lost its plot.. I will stop writing the story..