02-04-2025, 12:03 AM
(01-04-2025, 10:02 PM)Navipal007 Wrote: Because of the infrequent updates it gets difficult to remain in touch with the story. While the story was hot with a mixture of eroticism and suspense at the start, it has turned into a huge glob of mess with many characters and many storyline running at the same time. The story should not have got rid of chacha and what was his name guy with Ganga as the protagonist with Srinu always one step behind the action and adventure undertaken by Ganga and her partners.Story with fewer characters tend to get boring. How long will readers read about sex between the same characters.
Sorry KK I m not criticising but any story with too many characters and plotlines tend to suffer under it's own weight. Hope you make it more linear with more frequent updates.
Always a fan of your earlier work
Once would be good,Second time would be Meh....Third time,stop it already would be the reaction.
If the writer is talented enough to keep track of all his plotlines,bring on more characters.....more characters means more sex.