01-04-2025, 10:02 PM
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(31-03-2025, 03:09 PM)hotandluking Wrote: Previous update was on 24 Feb.Because of the infrequent updates it gets difficult to remain in touch with the story. While the story was hot with a mixture of eroticism and suspense at the start, it has turned into a huge glob of mess with many characters and many storyline running at the same time. The story should not have got rid of chacha and what was his name guy with Ganga as the protagonist with Srinu always one step behind the action and adventure undertaken by Ganga and her partners.
This update was on 30 March.
Feels like an eternity.
Sex story is all about instant gratification,If writer takes a long time,readers would expect a big update.
Never wrote anything,so,wouldnt know what effort writers put in but it is what it is,readers wont concern themselves about writers' problems. All we want is a quick
Sorry KK I m not criticising but any story with too many characters and plotlines tend to suffer under it's own weight. Hope you make it more linear with more frequent updates.
Always a fan of your earlier work