Misc. Erotica CHAMPA - EK AURAT YA KHILAUNA

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Bhai.... Shayad tum is story ko jaldi se khatam karna chahte ho.... Wo tumhara apna decision hai.... Lekin jis tarah ki hadbadahat tum ise khatam karne ki dikha rahe ho.... Us se sab gud gobar ho jayega.

Itni shaandaar story ka end bhi shaandaar hi hona chahiye... Mera suggestion hai ki kuchh din is story se ek break lo... Aur fir shanti se vichar kar ke jo bhi karna ho wo karo....

Chaho to story continue karo ya fir end karo... Per jo karna hai, is tarah jaldbaji mein mat karo....

Hey bro ... Good to see you back...

I agree... In trying to end this story quickly, BL is rushing through... Already in the last two updates, we have gone through 3 weeks or more in timeline.

The big reason why the story was so gripping for us was the slow buildup... Now it seems to be more like gist rather than the story itself.... I agree that the readership is down, but it needs to end just as it was all through the last 4-5 parts... Flowing and weaved as a beautiful symphony and not as a shallow number relying on beats rather than words and melody...

Especially now.... As this is the most crucial stage in this saga... Lots of changes occurring
.. especially with Manu, Suchi, Champa, Mansi and the central characters... 

Manu is changing and he needs to repair his relationships... With Suchi, with Suhana, Champa and Manasi amongst others.... It has to progress gradually..
 Structured as a hymn and proceeding till it reaches a crescendo ....

I agree the story has to end, but please BL don't rush it... Take a break if you want...  Just let it end as the story flowed all through... Beautifully, slowly... Meandering as a river reaching the plains and flowing into the sea...