30-03-2025, 10:56 AM
(30-03-2025, 01:39 AM)kuttoosan009 Wrote: Dear all readers............ I am started to write the next Update..... and also started writing 4 new stories
1. One story in cuckold category.
2. Nisha a Bank employee (Same category of Jaya) - (May be short story)
3. Dr. Anjali (Same category of Jaya) - (May be short story)
4. A wife of security officerman and Neighbour guy.
I think to write these stories also with Jays's story to fell fresh to write Jaya's story....
Your opinion please...!!!
Hi Kuttoosan,
Starting new stories is a great idea but in my opinion instead of writing new stories try to incorporate those situations in the Jaya story.
I think you must have seen something or got some idea or inspiration from somewhere to explore your writing more through a new story but the reason why I am asking you to try to see if you can incorporate those stories or situations in this Jaya story is because as a reader we have already become too much attached with Jaya's character and now with Ashima's character so we would love to get regular updates on this story. Now if you start writing a new story your time and focus will get divided into these multiple stories and the brilliant writer that you are, your characters and situations would be awesome then we readers would start demanding regular updates for those stories as well and then at one point you yourself will get stuck as to which story to prioritise and which story to leave but if you would bring those characters and situations to this story then you can focus on this story completely by diversifying it beautifully plus readers we also would get some new characters in the story with new situations. Like in this story Jaya and Ashima are teachers but their lives should not be stuck between just home and college. They can also visit banks and hospitals or a neighbour can be their near their homes. Also I always like Jaya's character as free as it is now so If you have time please rethink about getting her dominated by Mani's uncle instead you can explore other male characters and situations with Jaya and Ashima in the way you are planning to do in your new stories.