Village girl Amala (Update : Mar 31)

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Fantastic erotica. Bring back FLASHBACK OF GRANDPA AND HIS OLD FRIENDS ABUSED AMLA.

Secondly, in future writing remember:
ALL YOUR CHARACTERS NAMES MUST BE DIFFERENT,  NOT STARTING WITH SAME SYLLABLE, SAME THREE LETTERS NAME. IT DISYRAVTS YOUR STORY TO REMEMBER CHARACTERS NAMES. YOU MESSED UP ALL SIMILIAR NAMES. NEVER EVER GIVE SIMILAR NAMES. RULE OF LITERATURE:
KISHORE, ASHOK, ANIL, PAYAL, KAMLA, AMLA.
ALL THREE SYLLABLES.
Just a suggestion.  Your erotic story rocks.

Wow...some sane advice from doctor... I didn't even notice this and it makes a perfect sense... Will keep in mind next time..thanks bro