[doctor101]

Fantastic erotica. Bring back FLASHBACK OF GRANDPA AND HIS OLD FRIENDS ABUSED AMLA.

Secondly, in future writing remember:
ALL YOUR CHARACTERS NAMES MUST BE DIFFERENT, NOT STARTING WITH SAME SYLLABLE, SAME THREE LETTERS NAME. IT DISYRAVTS YOUR STORY TO REMEMBER CHARACTERS NAMES. YOU MESSED UP ALL SIMILIAR NAMES. NEVER EVER GIVE SIMILAR NAMES. RULE OF LITERATURE:
KISHORE, ASHOK, ANIL, PAYAL, KAMLA, AMLA.
ALL THREE SYLLABLES.
Just a suggestion. Your erotic story rocks.