28-03-2025, 02:28 AM
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(28-03-2025, 12:44 AM)Khan Saahab Wrote: Baat Rahul ke lucky hone ki nhi he baat to rahul ki jholi me khud ja ker girne ki he... woh bhi us waqt jab Rahul ki cheating khud apni aankhon se dekhi... very disgusting and unlogical
Khan Sahab… pehli baat toh.. mujhe personally bahut acha laga ki aap meri story itne dhyan se pad rahe hai aur aapka ek viewpoint bhi hai uske baare mein. Ek writer ko usse jyada kya hi chahiye, engaged audience… thank you so much!
Main aapki baat nahi kaat rahi, but Supriya ke perspective se woh abhi dimaag se nahi dil se soch rahi hai. Baat Rahul ki nahi hai, baat ye hai ki use lag raha hai ki Kriti ko kuch aisa kyu mil gaya jo uska tha. Shayad Kriti ki jagah koi aur ladki hoti toh Supriya ka ye reaction na hota. Supriya ko pehle se ye lagne laga tha ki Kriti ke paas woh sab kuch hai jo life mein use chahiye tha. Shayad ye mere liye feedback hai ki main is baat ko ache se story mein samjha nahi paayi.
Doosri baat, aap Supriya ko ek heroine ki tarah dekh rahe ho shayad, par woh shayad story ki main character toh hai par heroine nahi. Agar har koi life mein sahi decisions le paata toh crime patrol ke episode hi na bante. Usne abhi ek decision liya hai, jo dekhte hai uski life ko kaise impact karte hai.
Aur rahi baat Rahul ke lucky hone ki, main toh abhi bhi maanti hu woh lucky raha is maamle mein ki Supriya uski jholi mein aa kar gir gayi. Agar Rahul ne apna asli rang dikhaya hai toh Supriya bhi doodh ki dhuli toh nahi hai.
Par jo bhi ho, bahut bahut shukriya aapka. Abhi story mein thode twist baaki hai. Par ye dream sequence nahi hai.