[xboard1986]

My humble request to both sexypreeti and umavictor and anyone else who is not liking the story or have any suggestions. Maybe you can spinoff your own thread and write your own version on how would you have thought about the character and play.  Although it should be something that Suraj needs to approve .

I think given how I perceive his quality of writing to be patiently brewing something special, he wouldn't be offended with your version . Given his confidence and belief as a writer on what he already have in his vision towards the story.
Let's all be honest , he has only done justice with each and every character so far. We need to understand having sexual encounters or wild sex scenes every moment of story or making a character all submissive just after one or two heated moments of her would have not required such marvellous story situations. Those bending of a adultery with a weak character could have been simply done like any common porn, but what Suraj is trying to build I believe is something rare both from story and characters point of view.. Let's wait to see what the writer have to offer with his so far well thought characters and situations.

I would personally not want Suraj to get carried away by any comments . I hope we understand that all have our weak moments and we shouldn't cling onto it for any longer than it is required to explain to others

Let's not bother writer too much and let him work or plan his story further .

Whatever you choose ( with a strong hope of your continuation) , thanks Suraj  for sharing your story so far.
Fully agreed