[RCF]

U were saying i am not pinpointing the place where i didnt like the story... The above message was send to u after ur update on March 9 2025...i have cleanly mentioned wat went wrong here...

MY CONCERN IN THE STORY WAS SIMPLE.. IT WOULD BE NICE TO SEE SHIPRA BEING SUBMISSIVE FOR A WHILE... ENOUGH OF SHOWING ATTITUDE... THE DAY SHIPRA SAID I DNT CARE ABT HUBBY MSG, I DNT CARE SOCIETY SHE IS BROKEN... MY OPINION WAS JUST BRING OUT THAT SUBMISSIVENESS AND CONTINUE FOR ONE OR TWO UPDATE AND LATER WHEN PATODE ASK SHIPRA TO SLEEP WITH TOPPO AND OTHERS, SHE SHD AGAIN COME. TO HER REAL SENSE... SHE CAN BE OR SHD BE RELUCTANT... NOW NO USE OF AGAIN SHOWING RELUCTANCE HERE TO PATODE AS SHE HAD ALREADY GOT  BROKEN IN FRONT OF HIM MULTIPLE TIMES... 


These i have mentioned many times... I may be wrong but since i cidnt see tat in ur story i cannot get connected...I never poked u... Check out my story which i posted first page.. I have given u credit... Reason is because u r my inspiration...

Anyway lets keep all this aside.. U r  a best writter... May be i am a fool who cant get the feel... Happy.... Skip it wat happen today...

Shipra will say she doesn't care about her husband, she will say she doesn't care about society. She will have sex openly but all those emotions are when she is with Patode alone. When she is with Namratha and Patode she doesn't care about her job or husband nor she cares about her marriage as she is experiencing the dormant wild side of her past again and she is submitting to it, but when she is past that sexual high, she is back to her life where texts from her husband, news from her parents or video calls with her son are normal and take her back to the her original reality. She cannot ignore these and be in submissive state as both sides are part of herself.

When she is with Alok, her trying to get intimate with Alok desperately is showing her efforts to enjoy the life with Alok and to make herself believe that what she has experienced with Patode is not reality. hence she was resisting Patode. Once she realized that she is changed permanently with her experience with Patode she will become his slut but my guess is even in that state she will resist him when she thinks about her family, son and parents and society. That struggle is exactly what author is trying to show and it is in a sense an ordeal. Hope you get the patience to see how story unfolds and more changes in Shipra will eventually be revealed. It won't happen overnight as you were expecting.

~RCF