Adultery The Rural Posting: Shipra's ordeal.

[Umavictor32]

Sorry to say this, the first line of today's update made me feel that this will not get connected to me... Reason is because in ur last episode u ended in such a place where shipra says to patode to fuck me and accept that she is under his control...
So basic mentality what a reader will have is to know wat all conversations happen between them... Wat was attitude of patode after  tat fuck because he told namrata that after today sex shipra will degrade herself than u do... So everyone will wish to hear tat emotion... How shipra degraded herself...wat happen etc... but u simply cut that scene just like tat and started writting back home which didn't work for me ..

SO TO SUM UP, I DIDN'T LIKE TODAY'S UPDATE...SORRY...WAITING FOR NEXT UPDATE...

My sincere request is pls come out of tat loop...now shipra is broken...wats next ..pls shw us that .. Eagerly waiting for it ..

U were saying i am not pinpointing the place where i didnt like the story... The above message was send to u after ur update on March 9 2025...i have cleanly mentioned wat went wrong here...

MY CONCERN IN THE STORY WAS SIMPLE.. IT WOULD BE NICE TO SEE SHIPRA BEING SUBMISSIVE FOR A WHILE... ENOUGH OF SHOWING ATTITUDE... THE DAY SHIPRA SAID I DNT CARE ABT HUBBY MSG, I DNT CARE SOCIETY SHE IS BROKEN... MY OPINION WAS JUST BRING OUT THAT SUBMISSIVENESS AND CONTINUE FOR ONE OR TWO UPDATE AND LATER WHEN PATODE ASK SHIPRA TO SLEEP WITH TOPPO AND OTHERS, SHE SHD AGAIN COME. TO HER REAL SENSE... SHE CAN BE OR SHD BE RELUCTANT... ALSO WHEN IT COMES TO HER SON, SHE CAN GIVE PRIORITY TO HIM.. APART FROM THIS NOTHING ELSE.. NOW NO USE OF AGAIN SHOWING RELUCTANCE HERE TO PATODE AS SHE HAD ALREADY GOT  BROKEN IN FRONT OF HIM MULTIPLE TIMES... 


These i have mentioned many times... I may be wrong but since i cidnt see tat in ur story i cannot get connected...I never poked u... Check out my story which i posted first page.. I have given u credit... Reason is because u r my inspiration...

Anyway lets keep all this aside.. U r  a best writter... May be i am a fool who cant get the feel... Happy.... Skip it wat happen today...