Adultery Madhu and Tushar

[Umavictor32]

I do agree she slept with three people but as per my views sleeping with guys this way she will resist. I respect what you are saying and if you want can change the narrative. I tried to write whatever i felt as a girl but will consider your opinion

Sorry for late reply as xosippy was not working for me till nw... Secondly watever i said was my POV... Ur intention is good but whole story i felt very fake... Firstly this cannot be called a play... This was like tushar taking blue film... Secondly she lost her shyness and sanity after sleeping with tushar and sandeep then y this fake attitude... 


Atleast now u can do one thing. Make madhu character more dirty and bold or even a slut type... Because tushar male ego will have success face if u do tat.. Because a man's ego will be satisfied when he sees a girl who looked childish and decent transform to slut after he touch her...i would say this is nature... Thats the reason woman gets pregnant and have swollen stomach.. This makes ppl understand someone have fucked her and made her semen tank... So my request is make madhu slut type dirty and cheap... Let tushar and boys ne happy changing their teacher attitude to slut