20-03-2025, 09:14 AM
(20-03-2025, 02:52 AM)RCF Wrote: My honest opinion is criticism and negative comments are a given when you write a story in any portal. When you get more emotional comments it means readers connected more with your story than usual and it shows their connection to Nadir and Meena. If they connected well to Nadir, they might comment something in harsh looking at the circumstances in the story, same applies to the readers who connected to Meena character in the story.
What we comment sometimes are not about the true people, we forget to remember that we are reading about actual people..Tell me how many stories in this portal belong to a couple who are writing about themselves? none, I can tell you right now, its 0. So you see its hard to remember that story that we are reading is about real people and an autobiography. At least sometimes I forget about it and I feel like I am reading any other story fictional.
I agree some of the choice of words could be better but at the same time, its not right to abandon all other readers too. I am sure Lollo's intentions are definitely not to offend you guys but to give his honest opinion. If that opinion is not given in right chosen words then Nadir and Meena can point it out, but this concept of abandoning the story at every turn and twist is disheartening to see and its insulting for readers like me who is very interested in this story. I would like to say one thing, I really liked the point of view of Meena's writing and very much interested to read it further if its continued, else I would be leaving as well. Nothing on you Nadir but the story after reading 3 chapters I feel this phase as you have decided before belongs to Meena and her writing it would justify it well. If that is not happening please let me know so I can understand that and stop visiting this story.
~RCF
What happed here made us both very sad and me much more that I started this narrate, at all...
I am so sorry for the last days sad moments, the short life is not worth...
After so many years I saw her tears... it is a very bad, painful actually, feeling when you cause somebody who you love more than life itself is sad and ... you see her tears because of your fault... I am so sorry I began to take this path and tell the story of our life...
She let me know and instructed me to emphasize here that she is sorry to react so dramatically and she apologizes for everything...
Nadir