Adultery Love Sex And War Part 1 : Age Of Darkness

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Really?
Hemant - Kunal - both happy husbands and love their wives..Work hard for their family. Sex became a monotony and life became routine.
Sona - Esha - Wives who doesn't seek thrill outside marriage but friends or facilitators bullshit influence them, they start affair with some resistance, then the third person becomes integral part of their life with out whom they feel incomplete, yet they love their husband and son and also want to lead dual life. Then they bring all their necessary things to a common place and make their new home as second home....

Also there is son in the mix here as well and both parents love him to the end of the world. ......Sounds familiar?
 
The difference in this story from that is...Hero gets more screen time, as this story is not about all the characters like facilitator but more about Hemant, add his dark past like John wick and add another heroine who is rich and influential family who eventually is available to him as option, obviously writer wants to give good story arc to main lead because he hates cuckolds and he hates weak male leads who gets cheated, he has been advocating it in all the stories so I felt the story arc here is little predictable, I did not want to discourage Harry because we should encourage writers here as much as possible but that doesn't mean i should not advocate my views and give him a fair alert and request at the beginning of the story to bring unpredictability to the story.

Now you come here and call my comment as pathetic with out clarity and thought. Either ignore or understand what others are saying before judging them..I hope and guess this becomes a lesson for you.

You need to understand others have their own perspective, I have made similar mistake before with others who did not agree to my thinking but I have learnt it, better you do the same. 

~RCF

  I think wht dean meant to say is story has flaws and predictability is their this is his frst story right correcting n criticism two different thing and that to coming form u